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Humor : Scene Kids
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PostSubject: To Whom it Concerns   Fri Jun 13, 2008 6:02 am

To whom it concerns
I'm not so good with a ball
Girls don't watch non-jocks
When they walk through the halls

To whom it concerns
I just turned 15
I'm not hott at all
Which is why everyone is mean

To whom it concerns
I am not made of steel
When I get blindsided
My pain is quite real

I don't mean to whine
But it really burns
I just thought I'd mention it
To whom it concerns
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Age : 28
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PostSubject: Re: To Whom it Concerns   Fri Jun 13, 2008 7:56 pm

Yay! I adore this poem... My only tip is to be more creative with the fudge.
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